"Fire and Ice" he ordered the barman; his eyes fixated at her on the dance floor as she surrounded herself with total strangers.
He lit a cigarette casually.
She alone knew of what he burned inside. Smiling, she headed towards him.
Her icy cold lips met his,dousing the fire she had lighted, yet, again!
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P.S : My first attempt at 55fiction
Very Sweet and Very short. Loved it. Both my girls writing about the same thing, one inspired by the other and both doing justice to their thoughts. Lovely Amo, Keep it up. You first attempt at 55 fiction is very very nice. Looking forward to your next post.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you happened to like it M. Yes, Sweety's version was a surprise coz this was something I wrote in just a jiffy without much thought and she churned such a beautiful piece, reading well in between the lines and writing exactly what I had in mind :)
DeleteHi Amo, loved this one , so short yet complete, very good for a first attempt at 55 word fiction.Loved the scene you created.Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteThank you D. Nice to know you enjoyed the read. :)
DeleteWowie! So you jumped aboard the 55fiction bandwagon, and in such style! Bravo! This one's a gem, and can be interpreted in so many ways (as is evident by the entries in another famous blog :D)
ReplyDeleteGreat going! And needless to say, you've taken the lead and others will follow... which, needless to say, means a treat for us readers :)