Apr 18, 2012

Captivated - 55 Fiction #4



She looked at me with sad eyes even though her lips were half smiling.
The same look which had captivated me for years, which had me tethered here. 

But now, I wanted to leave, had to.

I stepped out of the house, while my unfinished painting of her, turned to embers along with her memories.

Image courtesy : A travelogue in http://convassor.info

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  1. IT WAS NICE TO READ LINES,BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BY YOU, AFTER A LONG LONG BREAK.LOVED IT.

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    1. Thnk you D. I had actually written a couple of months before :)

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  2. Nice to see you back, Mystic!
    The look and feel of the renovated blog is neat, dainty and dapper!
    Like the Popular Posts section, though in your case all posts qualify to fit in there :)
    Keep writing, and continue doling out gems!

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    1. Thank you Smarty. I like this look myself :)

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  3. Now that was cruel yet so poetic!! I truly loved this one. How the heart years to erase the memories...

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    1. Thank you Red, for dropping by to read. Glad you liked the post.
      I guess my blog was under construction when you tried to follow but now its settled :)

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  4. and I wonder how to follow u. the icons are nt appearing :/

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  5. I couldn't guess till the end. Eyes of a painting if done well are always intriguing. Good read

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