Dec 27, 2011

Interweaved

The day and the night;
Your hands and mine.

The lightening and the rain;
Your eyes and mine.

The sky and the clouds;
Your thoughts and mine.

The stars and the moon;
Your dreams and mine.

The clashing waves and the thunder
Your beating heart and mine.

Heaven and earth;
Your life and mine.

Interweaved threads of two souls;
The breeze and the swaying creeper;
You and I.



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Wrote these random lines over a week ago. Random, yes; but the way I see it and feel it,its true.

P.S: I so wish I had the ability to express feelings in poetic words. I try and each time I feel dissatisfied that I just cant seem to find the right words and put them in the right places!

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  1. Amo, that was beautiful. I just loved it, random thoughts ,expresses so beautifully,I even loved each word you chose to weave your poetry.Good girl.Love you kid.

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  2. One of the most beautiful lines I've ever had the pleasure of reading! :) Loved the way you expressed your feelings...each word you used, I could understand why it was used...every emotion, I could see you going through...

    Loved it totally and you don't need rhyming words...your work takes poetry to a new level, Amo. Love you :*

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  3. @D : Thank you so much :)
    Somehow whenever I hear 'Good girl' I remember Christmas and the time spent there :).Love you loads too :)

    @CJ : Thank you so much sweetz.. As i said it was just random words. I wont call it poetry. And for rest of the praises showered, you are so very biased- aren't you ? :D
    Love you :* :*

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  4. @Ankit Aggarwal - Thank you :)

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